“I’d rather take my kids to a public school than a state-run one”
Social division between Public and State schools has been caused these days, with big demonstrations being organised to support the two education systems because the government has a short/LIMITED budget for education. (In such way, the headline expression, that I heard last afternoon(THIS IS A BIT TOO INFORMAL: DELETE, is an example of this situation). But are Private schools better than Public ones? What is the best choice? VERY GOOD PARAGRAPH!
The most important advantage of Public schools is that many of them have better facilities and there are no important discipline problems/ISSUES. Consequently, their pupils are beING taught in good conditions // AND THEY get good marks. An additional advantage of choosing Private schools is that most of them are religious. That is also another issue because parents choose to send their children to a specific school which has a program and an educational philosophy with which they are comfortable. However, perhaps the most important and worrying downside MIGHT BE that they are very expensive, even THough they are semi-private or state- supported schools.
On the other hand, most of the State schools, where student population tends to be more diverse, are doing an excellent job. A Private education is usually out of REACH for poorer students. If you want your children to know children from different races and socioeconomic backgrounds, then State school is for you.
To sum up, although Public and State education have advantages and disadvantages, I believe that there is not perfect system and that diversity of schools, freedom of choice, even competition, and top quality teaching from excellent teachers pay dividends. EXCELLENT. IN OUR STRUCTURE WE ARE TRYING TO FAVOUR ONE POSITION OVER THE OTHER, ALTHOUGH THE STRUCTURE YOU USE IS ANOTHER OPTION.
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