Against
- It’s a break, not travel
- Stick what you known, fear
- Overcrowded place
- Cheaper
- Freedom
- Independent travel is a great way to meet the locals and other travelers
INTRO
General statement (engaging, striking)
- The number of travellers has growled at a huge rate in the past few years.
- One of the most striking aspects of research into the new ways of travelling over the years has been the/that...
- In the last few years, travelling has gotten much better, especially compared with our first trips.
Opposing view/Specific problem
- If we focus on the way they travel, we can notice even a greater grow rate in both independent and package travellers.
- There has been an increase on the number of people travelling on their own and less and less Passengers on package holidays but in more luxurious resorts
- in such a way that travellers have completely changed how we travel, in general, and how we purchase those trips, in particular.
Thesis:
- This essay will analyze the arguments for and against travelling independently in contrast to travelling in all-inclusive package
- This essay will briefly outline the advantages and disadvantages of the different ways of travelling
AGAINST:
Topic sentence: Package holidays have several disadvantages
- Reason 1: In the first place package holidays involve that you basically spend most of your time in a resort complex. Consequently you take your holydays easy but it is nowhere near as adventurous as an independent trip.
- Reason 2: What is more, People are afraid of the new, the unknown. They want to stick with what they know, as a result they tend to book all included holidays. However, By doing something different like backpacking or flashpacking, they are opening themselves up to new experiences, new ways of doing and seeing things, a new them.
- Reason 3: Last, but not least, all that tourist are looking for on a holiday is sea, sun and entertainment. Because of this most of the seaside locations, which the main package organiser offers are tuned out to become very popular or overcrowded. In contrast, off the beaten track places are still unknown.
Topic sentence:
- However there are also advantages about travelling independently
- Travelling independently have also several advantages
- Reason 1: To start with, travelling on your own is cheaper than package holidays, as you can compare air prices and hotel accommodations and choose the best option.
- Reason 2: Another positive aspect is that since you have not paid for a pack you do not feel obligated to stay in a specific place rather than move around and explore.
- Reason3: Also travelling independently involve more opportunity to experience the true culture of the country you are visiting by meeting people because you are forced to initiate conversations with locals and meet people when you need to satisfy a need or solve a problem
CONCLUSION
Rephrase the question and summarize the main ideas
In conclusion, it seems that package holidays offer a comfortable and carefree way to spend your vacation, but they also have some drawbacks that people often tend to forget about.
Give my opinion
In my view, enjoying unspoiled places and having freedom to socialize with the local community are proof enough to conclude that travel independently is the best option as a way to have great and cheap experiences.
Look to the future
The more you become part of one’s new surrounding the more welcome and confortable one will feel